Saturday, September 19, 2009

My Wish...

Please embrace me in your wings,

As I devote myself to your beauty.

Let me find what I seek,

All I want is what love gives me.

All my life I will carry you on my back,

Please wait for me with open arms,

At the end of the Track.

Take my hand and follow me,

I’ll take you to a world of fantasy.

Pleasure of togetherness will, hold our pain inside.

Let’s live in a world where we exist for eternity.

Where there is no pain and no lies.

A World where sorrow dies and only love survives.

                                 -----XXX-----

22 comments:

  1. Wow!!! It is really a nice and interesting post. I like it. After reading the whole lines, I have reached at this point that the writer is very open heart and a nice human whose aspect and level of thinking about any topic is very wide. I like the quality of writing. It is such a great and appreciative post..
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    SHELLY KANE

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  2. wow! nice article the concept of the article is very influence, some of the lines are brilliants.
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    Shane

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  3. Nice quote........... Author is a big fan of beauty and seek for real beauty.......he has a lot of pain inside his heart which came out in these lines. he is finding a world "Where there is no pain and no lies" I appreciate his thoughts and wish to get these things in my life...
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  4. An awesome sonnet with explicit expressions of emotions, felt like the the poet has sliced open his heart to take out the feelings.
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    Jacob
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  5. Great. It is very beautiful. It seems that the poet have opened his heart showing his love for someone very special.
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    Roger
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  6. It is a very good sonnet.The feelings of the composer are very true for his love and comes right from center of his heart.
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    alex
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  7. Wow.... It is really nice and beautiful poem.The author is searching for the true love, he is finding a place or world where, there is no pain.he is open his heart and calling to a true love.
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    roger
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  8. Wow! thats great site because here author says that love is not only love but its beyond it.
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    jennifer
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  9. its a very nice poem and expresses the feelings of true love, a love which will never die and walk forward with themselves always.
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    Cynthia
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  10. nice quote!!! author is a big fan of beauty.The feelings of the composer is very true,i like the quality of writing.he is finding a world "where there is no pain and no lies"
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    kevin
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  11. It seems that the writer is very well-versed with this feeling and is for sure an intelligent person. I agree a lot with the thoughts expressed by him and have felt the same in my life at many points.
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  12. it is really nice & intresting poem it define true of love and beauty. I like it. I appreciate his thought.
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    david
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  13. an excellent sonnet...very expressive feeling of writer about relationship...here the writer wants to survive in the world of fantasy, where there is no sorrow and lie, which is not realistic...
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    cristina
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  14. wow!!! a very good quote.The writter has slice opened his heart. His feelings for his love are very affectionate and true.
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    gagan
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  15. writer's imagination power is so nice,he is imaging about a world which,I am also searching.
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    Randy
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  16. It is beautiful. The imaginative power of writer is very wide. His feeling for his love is very touching.
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    Prashant
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  17. its a outstanding feeling of love,which can not be describes.the whole poem expresses the fantasy of true love.
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    meenu
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  18. Its a very good sonnet. here author express that its not only poem but its reality of love.
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    babli

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  19. A very expressive sonnet. i like this particular because of its imaginative feature.
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    robert
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  20. in this sonnet the poet finds the path in which he and his love stays.it defines about true love and d beauty of their love.it is really realistic and nice.
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  22. The feelings of the composer are very true for his love and comes right from center of his heart.
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